考研英语一大作文真题：2022年雅思外教范文#17：阿德莱德3月12日雅思大作文真题 (含音频)

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你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，给大家带来2022年3月12日澳洲阿德莱德的雅思大作文真题的范文。

老规矩考研英语一大作文真题，以下是正文目录：

1，题目

2，审题

3考研英语一大作文真题，高分范文

4，范文朗读

5，范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：

上题：

These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages in terms of family development?

审题：

- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -

▲范文音频戳这里▲

In the modern world, it is not uncommon for a guardian, or parents, to go overseas in order to work, and in so doing, are accompanied by their family members. In my opinion, though there may be drawbacks from this in relation to family development, overall, I believe the positives are greater.

One of the main advantages of being accompanied overseas when a parent relocates abroad for a job is that this situation allows for the family unit to remain together. Psychologically, this scenario is normally considered paramount in terms of child socialization and growth, as the young person, despite needing to settle in a new environment, will have the continuity of parental contact and emotional support. With parental oversight, the child will then be able to reap the benefits of adapting to a new culture, language, and people, and as such, these circumstances can incur an upbringing that most children will not experience, giving the youngster an advantage in later life.

There are, however, some dangers for family development from children joining a parent, or parents, overseas, namely that the child will feel displaced and that it may produce a sense of detachment. This detachment from one’s normal environment may cause off-spring unwanted angst and stress; likewise, the same could be said for a spouse. Nevertheless, these risks of feeling isolated and having increased levels of anxiety, though they can be debilitating for the sufferer, the alternative of being separated for extended periods of time from a loved one, such as a husband and father, can be even more devastating for both the spouse and the child.

In conclusion, in spite of the elevated risks for both spouse and child from being uprooted from their normal environment, in my opinion, the benefits of traveling or migrating overseas to accompany a family member more than likely outweigh any negative impact that may be felt, since the situation can ensure the integrity of the family unit, and additionally, can be a culturally rewarding experience.

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- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -

- (1) Introduction

In the modern world,it is not uncommon for a guardian, or parents, to go overseas in order to work, and in so doing, are accompanied by their family members. In my opinion, though there may be drawbacks from this in relation to family development, overall, I believe the positives are greater.

Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 题目改述:

Standard Phrase for the “Opinion” type essay 观点类大作文高分句型：

Words showing Cohesion (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语:

Vocabulary高分地道词汇和短语：

- (2) Body 1 -

Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要提到：

One of the main advantages of being accompanied overseas when a parent relocates abroad for a job is that this situation allows for the family unit to remain together. Psychologically, this scenario is normally considered paramount in terms of child socialization and growth, as the young person, despite needing to settle in a new environment, will have the continuity of parental contact and emotional support. With parental oversight, the child will then be able to reap the benefits ofadapting to a new culture, language, and people, and as such, these circumstances can incuran upbringing that most children will not experience, giving the youngster an advantage in later life.

Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型：

Vocabulary and Collocations高分地道词汇和短语：

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：

- (3) Body 2 -

Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要提到：

There are, however, some dangers for family development from children joining a parent, or parents, overseas, namely that the child will feel displaced and that it may produce a sense of detachment. This detachment from one’s normal environment may cause off-spring unwanted angst and stress; likewise, the same could be said for a spouse. Nevertheless, these risks of feeling isolated and having increased levels of anxiety, though they can be debilitating for the sufferer, the alternative of being separated for extended periods of time from a loved one, such as a husband and father, can be even more devastating for both the spouse and the child.

Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型：

Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：

- (4) Conclusion -

In conclusion, in spite of the elevated risks for both spouse and child from being uprooted from their normal environment, in my opinion, the benefits of traveling or migrating overseas to accompany a family member more than likely outweigh any negative impact that may be felt, since the situation can ensurethe integrity of the family unit, and additionally, can be a culturally rewarding experience.

Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型：

Vocabulary and Collocations高分地道词汇和短语：

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：

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